Mithra sketch, not quite done yet.

[yuna544]

Tell me what you think, it is a little messed up right now but I'll fix that when I'm done. Also I'm not sure how to do the face and legs so can someone help me with that, please.
http://www.boomspeed.com/siya/scetch.jpg

[Tenkei]

Her breasts are a little bit low - I think that's the only problem I can see.

[Saken]

Heh...looks good good shape but the figure is a little off...It will be a good drawing when you finish though.

[yuna544]

Originally posted by Tenkei
Her breasts are a little bit low - I think that's the only problem I can see.

:sweat: It's the first thing I've drawn so I didn't expect it it to be perfect the first time but I'll fix that.

[yuna544]

Here's an udated one I fixed it a bit and I added more I think it still a little off though, tell me wht you think of it now. I tried drawning the legs but I'm not very good at them also the hands are quite hard to draw too.
http://www.boomspeed.com/siya/sketch.jpg

[Crashpod]

the breast are still a bit messed up

[Chipmunk777]

yes, the shoulders dont quite fit with the rest of the upper body. i like the face i thought it looked good before u changed the breasts and stuffs. but, its lookin good so far. oh, and the legs need to be longer, and have more covering (i assume thats the kind of look you're going for, based on the upper body.) and, im not quite sure how to do the hands, ive always had trouble with hands as well. looks like u ran out of paper... like, the upper part looks really good, but as u go down the paper, it seems to get a bit more crammed, for space purposes... i also just noticed that she needs a bit more meat on her bones... cuz everything elses lookin big and baggy (looks good) but her torso's kinda stick-ish. sorry i couldnt help with the arms/hands (btw, im sorry if i wasnt any help at all :p)

[Arcane Killer]

the torso needs to be shorten...

[yuna544]

Here's another updated one. In the other drawings I forgot to add a tail:sweat: how could I forget the tail. I also added more eraser marks:sweat: not on purpose of course.
http://www.boomspeed.com/siya/Untitled-Scanned-01.jpg

[Namragus]

the torsos alot better

[Skyrik]

Hmmm probably is a good idea to leave the feet out... mind if I play the nitpicky critic? :spin:

[yuna544]

Originally posted by Skyrik
mind if I play the nitpicky critic? :spin:

Not at all.

[Skyrik]

Ok I dont explain things very well... so I've have to use a paintover... ^^'. Red is for the anatomy and blue is for her clothes.

Some of the crits are just based on style and opinion.


Head - Normally necks shouldnt go longer than two heads, as measured by the two head height on the left, down to her shoulders. Half a head should be fine.

Shoulders - Women have a smaller width measure between the shoulders. Broader shoulders are usually for men.

Hands - Well it pretty much goes with her shoulders.

Breasts - ... The top part of her breast should slope down to the actual round part...

Waist - Your second revision is definitely better... but I still have a few beef about her clothes. If her clothes are tight enough to slightly shapeout her breast... it should do the same to her waist line... I dunno I guess its a style issue since I want her to look mor shapely.

Tail - Its ok... thought It could be a bit thicker... again a style issue...

Over all... A great try . Just take mind the actual shape of the body inside all of the clothing more.

Oh and this is just a thought... I dont want you to erase everything you have.

[Chipmunk777]

nicely put, skyrik but i dont know what you're going to do about the legs :spin:

[Namragus]

Originally posted by Skyrik
Just take mind the actual shape of the body inside all of the clothing more.

hmm... i agree, maybe practice a few without cloths, and post them?