Mithra sketch, not quite done yet.

[yuna544]

Tell me what you think, it is a little messed up right now but I'll fix that when I'm done. Also I'm not sure how to do the face and legs so can someone help me with that, please.
http://www.boomspeed.com/siya/scetch.jpg

[Tenkei]

Her breasts are a little bit low - I think that's the only problem I can see.

[Saken]

Heh...looks good good shape but the figure is a little off...It will be a good drawing when you finish though.

[yuna544]

Originally posted by Tenkei
Her breasts are a little bit low - I think that's the only problem I can see.

:sweat: It's the first thing I've drawn so I didn't expect it it to be perfect the first time but I'll fix that.

[yuna544]

Here's an udated one I fixed it a bit and I added more I think it still a little off though, tell me wht you think of it now. I tried drawning the legs but I'm not very good at them also the hands are quite hard to draw too.
http://www.boomspeed.com/siya/sketch.jpg

[Crashpod]

the breast are still a bit messed up

[Chipmunk777]

yes, the shoulders dont quite fit with the rest of the upper body. i like the face :thumbsup: i thought it looked good before u changed the breasts and stuffs. but, its lookin good so far. oh, and the legs need to be longer, and have more covering (i assume thats the kind of look you're going for, based on the upper body.) and, im not quite sure how to do the hands, ive always had trouble with hands as well. looks like u ran out of paper... like, the upper part looks really good, but as u go down the paper, it seems to get a bit more crammed, for space purposes... i also just noticed that she needs a bit more meat on her bones... cuz everything elses lookin big and baggy (looks good) but her torso's kinda stick-ish. sorry i couldnt help with the arms/hands (btw, im sorry if i wasnt any help at all :p)

[Arcane Killer]

the torso needs to be shorten...:thumbsup:

[yuna544]

Here's another updated one. In the other drawings I forgot to add a tail:sweat: how could I forget the tail. I also added more eraser marks:sweat: not on purpose of course.
http://www.boomspeed.com/siya/Untitled-Scanned-01.jpg

[Namragus]

the torsos alot better

[Skyrik]

Hmmm probably is a good idea to leave the feet out... mind if I play the nitpicky critic? :spin:

[yuna544]

Originally posted by Skyrik
mind if I play the nitpicky critic? :spin:

Not at all.

[Skyrik]

Ok I dont explain things very well... so I've have to use a paintover... ^^'. Red is for the anatomy and blue is for her clothes.

Some of the crits are just based on style and opinion.
http://members.aol.com/cliveiii/pkfolder/drawoveryunasmithra.gif

Head - Normally necks shouldnt go longer than two heads, as measured by the two head height on the left, down to her shoulders. Half a head should be fine.

Shoulders - Women have a smaller width measure between the shoulders. Broader shoulders are usually for men.

Hands - Well it pretty much goes with her shoulders.

Breasts - ... The top part of her breast should slope down to the actual round part...

Waist - Your second revision is definitely better... but I still have a few beef about her clothes. If her clothes are tight enough to slightly shapeout her breast... it should do the same to her waist line... I dunno I guess its a style issue since I want her to look mor shapely.

Tail - Its ok... thought It could be a bit thicker... again a style issue...

Over all... A great try:) . Just take mind the actual shape of the body inside all of the clothing more.

Oh and this is just a thought... I dont want you to erase everything you have.

[Chipmunk777]

nicely put, skyrik :thumbsup: but i dont know what you're going to do about the legs :spin:

[Namragus]

Originally posted by Skyrik
Just take mind the actual shape of the body inside all of the clothing more.
hmm... i agree, maybe practice a few without cloths, and post them?

[yuna544]

Thanks skyrik, it helps me see how it should be.

[yuna544]

How about this is a good start.

[Namragus]

YES shes drawing nude mithras :thumbsup: lol

<edit> i think the breasts are uneven, and need to be a little rounder ;)

[Chipmunk777]

the hood is too large, make it a bit smaller, or make the body bigger. it looks out of place

[yuna544]

How about now. The eyes are a bit messed up though. Should I draw the whole body first and then the details?

[Chipmunk777]

its looking better, but i think the body needs a bit more meat on the bones. but, usually when drawing, you draw the outline of the body first, then slowly add details (it depends on how you draw, but that usually how I draw)

[yuna544]

How about now?

[Chipmunk777]

that looks better :spin: but, i think she should have a bit more of a "filled out" type of figure

[yuna544]

The legs are hard for me to draw but I tried. Anyways here's an updated one.

[Crashpod]

her left eye is bigger then her right eye....

[yuna544]

Originally posted by Crashpod
her left eye is bigger then her right eye....

stupid left eye...

[Chipmunk777]

yeah, legs are hard. you need to make yours longer, and have a bit more shape to them (have a slight slope coming from the hip down to the ankle, unless the pants aren't skin-tight) but, other than that, its startin to look pretty good

[Skyrik]

Yup this time her body looks more together :) ...

If you're trying and still not getting her legs right... try this tutorial (http://polykarbon.com/tutorials/body/stick.htm). Its all about the head measurements that I was talking about.

[Namragus]

i think the necks still a bit long but maybe thats just me

[Cloud784]

yea, the drawing is pretty good, but i think one of the problems u have been having is that u are getting the altogether figure wrong, although the seperate parts are nicely done. To fix this, try using stick figure like the one in the tutorial. That way, u can get all the porportions correct. Maybe it is just me, but i find that when i draw the outside contour w/o a skelaton or "stick figure", the drawing comes out pretty bad :(



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