[Akashimo]

"Not so easily, he's gonna have to do some major ass-kissing for me to even consider forgiving him." The devious mithra laughed, taking Akashimo by the scruff of his neck and dragging him inside his new home. "Come join us, friend." She motioned to the Elvaan. "And you little man, are gonna remember this day for the rest of your life.

"Eeep, come on sis, I'm sorry, just don't go extreme again..." He begged, and struggled as she dragged him on the ground to impending doom. Seeing something fly out of the mog house was his supposed loyal moogle. "Traitor!" He yelled at it, which made it froze and look back at him before darting away. "Why can't one day be a peaceful one with you?" He thought to himself, then sighed.

[Eiyoko]

"As you wish," Eiyoko said rather passively, following the Mithra and the Hume into the mog house. It was certainly more decorated than her own home, which only had a bed, a table, a chair and a coffer. She was a bit nervous about following them in, however; judging by how upset Nekoai was and how startled the hume was to see her, Eiyoko got the feeling things weren't going to be lovely.

OOC

Kinda funny to see an "older brother" act frightened of his "younger sister" if you ask me XD

[Akashimo]

OOC

lawl, its getting tough to come up with material at this point now XD But I ain't giving up!

"Sis, come on, be reasonable..." Akashimo pleaded to Nekoai, but apparently no avail. He dug his grave this time, out of all the spats he had with Nekoai, this by far was the worst to date. "And who is your friend here anyways, don't tell me you ----" His mouth went shut when the glare of the Berserking Mithra caused her own 'killer' effect to activate on him.

"You of all people asking me to be reasonable you big idiot!? I shouldn't even let the thought cross my mind!" She smack him hard acrossed the face. "Brother, you remember that time in Jueno at the tavern? I'm gonna 'treat' you to that again, this time, without the crowd." She grinned, pressing against him hard and close, looking into his eyes with anger and seduction. "I'm gonna make you squirm so badly." She laughed, feeling him want to get away from this but at the same time, notice his eyes dead locked onto her body.

"Sis, I....I'm sorry, just please not this again. I haven't walked right for a week from that last time!" He paniced, yet her body just made his eyes fixed and hard to move aside the fact from being pinned down.

[Jarre]

OCC

Aka I have writen 5 science fiction short stories and had them published in a magazine, every character that speaks has to on a seperate line, its like a conversation thats how you write it. You then have to paint the picture, keep things fast paced to keep someone interested in continuing to read. if you can't control someones character for a short time to keep your small conribution flowing then you have to spend hours sat with teh next person to plot out the storyline. As for my grammar no ones perfect if your gonna complain about everything then I will pull out now. Don't forget American grammar is noticably different to english grammar and spelling, your just insulting my culture.