please check this out and leave feed back lol ok

Newbz · 07-14-2006, 08:28 AM

i suck at this but i try so hard to make this please let me know if is ok or bad
enjoi lol really i think is cute in a way lol what u think?

Newbz · 07-14-2006, 08:31 AM

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Altae · 07-14-2006, 03:34 PM

The effort certainly is pretty worthwhile to comment on. But the captions/text bubbles aren't very legible. I can't tell if you're trying to make the character say "bish," "BST," or "both."

Jekk · 07-14-2006, 04:52 PM

I can't read most of it o_o you should leave the bubbles blank and then add the words on photoshop/paint or whatever you have. It's pretty good^^ You could work on side views though.

Newbz · 07-15-2006, 01:11 AM

>.< if i could only put them the normal size u guys could read it everything is so small so u cant make out the words >.< sorry anyway if anyone is wondering whats about it
its about those two moffos going at a electronic store to buy the new expansion pack lol
if you know how despered some people are and u know they cant wait a day or 2 to get it
and rush there the very day it comes out lol its a freaking war!! lol but i do feel so bad cause u guys cant read it >.< ill try to fix it

Samuzuki · 07-15-2006, 06:33 PM

very nice.

Hecky · 07-18-2006, 01:03 PM

lmao!!! i loved the one whit whm afk! lol really good i like your style

Balfree · 07-19-2006, 12:51 AM

your style is really refreshing, but yea, the text is barely readable..

Newbz · 07-19-2006, 01:54 AM

thanks here i fixed the 3 first pages maybe u can read it now

Newbz · 07-19-2006, 08:20 AM

can anyone tell me if there is a way to put the picture here without making it small?

cause everytime i post i have to make them small and the letters cant be seen i hate that

Centurion · 07-19-2006, 08:39 AM

if you link the photos to an image hosting site you can have larger pictures.

here is a list of Image hosting sites

hope that helps

Newbz · 07-19-2006, 11:12 AM

http://img66.imageshack.us/my.php?im...nthief1nm7.jpg

http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief2ym5.jpg

http://img105.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief3lz3.jpg

http://img264.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief4ft7.jpg

if those links work check them out 3 pictures of a new manga style comic i made i think their really funny but thats just me let me know if you guys like them

07-14-2006, 08:28 AM	#1
Newbz Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 Posts	please check this out and leave feed back lol ok i suck at this but i try so hard to make this please let me know if is ok or bad enjoi lol really i think is cute in a way lol what u think? Attached Thumbnails

07-14-2006, 08:31 AM	#2
Newbz Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok .. Double Post Edited: ,, Attached Thumbnails Last edited by Newbz; 07-14-2006 at 08:31 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

07-14-2006, 03:34 PM	#3
Altae Member Bronze Ribbon of Service Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: PA, USA Posts: 533 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3x in 3 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok The effort certainly is pretty worthwhile to comment on. But the captions/text bubbles aren't very legible. I can't tell if you're trying to make the character say "bish," "BST," or "both." __________________ Altaeciana:75RDM/40BLM/71WHM/40SMN/37NIN/37DRK/40RNG/37WAR Elemental days of our lives . . .:Fire-Earth-Water-Wind-Ice-Thunder-Light-Dark

07-14-2006, 04:52 PM	#4
Jekk o_O; Join Date: May 2006 Location: Canada, eh Posts: 135 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post My Mood:	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok I can't read most of it o_o you should leave the bubbles blank and then add the words on photoshop/paint or whatever you have. It's pretty good^^ You could work on side views though.

07-15-2006, 01:11 AM	#5
Newbz Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok >.< if i could only put them the normal size u guys could read it everything is so small so u cant make out the words >.< sorry anyway if anyone is wondering whats about it its about those two moffos going at a electronic store to buy the new expansion pack lol if you know how despered some people are and u know they cant wait a day or 2 to get it and rush there the very day it comes out lol its a freaking war!! lol but i do feel so bad cause u guys cant read it >.< ill try to fix it

07-15-2006, 06:33 PM	#6
Samuzuki Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2004 Posts: 98 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 2 Thanked 2x in 2 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok very nice. __________________

07-18-2006, 01:03 PM	#7
Hecky Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Norway Posts: 48 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok lmao!!! i loved the one whit whm afk! lol really good i like your style __________________ Keep on rocking in the free world! In the end your alway alone! So far... So good... So what!? BLM/RDM ~ DRG/WAR Clothcraft

07-19-2006, 01:54 AM	#9
Newbz Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok thanks here i fixed the 3 first pages maybe u can read it now Attached Thumbnails

07-19-2006, 08:20 AM	#10
Newbz Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok can anyone tell me if there is a way to put the picture here without making it small? cause everytime i post i have to make them small and the letters cant be seen i hate that Last edited by Newbz; 07-19-2006 at 08:35 AM.

07-19-2006, 08:39 AM	#11
Centurion Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 286 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok if you link the photos to an image hosting site you can have larger pictures. here is a list of Image hosting sites hope that helps __________________

07-19-2006, 11:12 AM	#12
Newbz Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 32 Style: Light Theme V7 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0x in 0 Posts	Re: please check this out and leave feed back lol ok http://img66.imageshack.us/my.php?im...nthief1nm7.jpg http://img164.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief2ym5.jpg http://img105.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief3lz3.jpg http://img264.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nthief4ft7.jpg if those links work check them out 3 pictures of a new manga style comic i made i think their really funny but thats just me let me know if you guys like them Last edited by Newbz; 07-19-2006 at 12:18 PM.

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