[Kikku]

sweet can't wait sweetie!

[Laifierr]

I was doing a search on google images for hume pics and saw my sig pic come up. lol

[Kikku]

that cool i think xD

[Ejospike]

well good to know you didnt just vanish.. i like your artwork and i cant wait to see what else you make... i wanna add some specifics to my request if thats fine
the tarutaru being carried away, can you have her in summoner AF
also can you have those electrical energy lines that appear when you summon something still surging? as if she over-used her powers?
thanks ^^ i cant wait to see how you make it turn out, ill wait and see, no matter how long it takes

[Laifierr]

Here is my latest sketch

[Kikku]

awwww i knew it be cute <3

[Ejospike]

wow... very nice

[Laifierr]

here is a better quality one. Spent some time redoing the lines with a darker pencil

[IfritnoItazura]

Don't know why exactly, but the picture bugs me.

1. The guys' body... Seems oddly "twisted".
2. I want to say they are kissing too deeply for her arms to be "flowing" behind her. >_>; I do like her pose, though.
3. Her foreground foot is smaller than the background one?
3. Wonder if there's a way to heighten the drama:
4a. Separate them a little, give a tiny amount of space between their lips, so make the kiss impending rather than actual?
4b. If she flows into him for a hard kiss, he should be knocked backwards with his body bending into hers; they should be both crashing through space as they share this kiss, and the picture should give that sense of motion?

[Feba]

I have to agree with ita's points, unless they're floating/underwater (could be a neat shot in Al'Taeiu)

Also, you still owe me a taru in a bear suit D:

[Laifierr]

1. The guy's body is supposed to be twisted because he's turning to pull his girl into him. he's also leaning back slightly.
2. I wanted them to be kissing deeply because it shows their realized feelings for each other. If they are about to kiss, then that shows they haven't kissed yet and you don't know if they are or aren't going to kiss.
3. The foot is an easy fix in photoshop.
4. I'm not going to redraw the image because this is what I wanted.
5. And... they are floating in the air, she isn't leaping at him.
6. I really don't like being critiqued unless its by the person whose drawing this is for. >.>;
7. And yes Feba, I know you want a taru in bear suit. ^^

8. sorry, havn't had my caffeine fix yet for this morning.

[Vyuru]

1) Dragoons get the girls

Or else he's just showing his appreciation for bard song X

The only thing that bothers me about the pic is that the kiss seems too one sided, but it's still a fine picture, nice drawing as usual Laifierr ^^

EDIT:

I don't know why, but I almost always like the rough drawing better than the cleaned up finished version. Maybe it's because the sketches seem to give the picture some texture that is lacking in the cleaned up version.

[IfritnoItazura]

Originally Posted by Laifierr

6. I really don't like being critiqued unless its by the person whose drawing this is for. >.>;

My apologies, then.

[Feba]

I don't know why, but I almost always like the rough drawing better than the cleaned up finished version. Maybe it's because the sketches seem to give the picture some texture that is lacking in the cleaned up version.

To some point, yeah. You wouldn't happen to read megatokyo, would you?

[Laifierr]

Originally Posted by IfritnoItazura

My apologies, then.

Sorry if I came off as harsh I've been in art school for 6 years now and I get tired of critiques xD I just want an outlet to have fun with my art. ^^ which is why I'm offering these drawings for free.