first fan work

[crono]

its me! my first anime-style sketch.. what do you guys think?

[vagtark]

thats pretty good man. wish i can draw good:sweat:

[Mr. Teng]

pretty good, the arms are a little awkward, then again, that's probably the hardest part. good job.

[Maxim]

Hehe, neat. When I draw, I usually put the hands/arms of the character behind them so I don't have to draw them because they're difficult to draw. XD

[Look]

arms may be a little bit skinny...
i would perfer his mouth a little bit wider... btw, when you draw nose, you can try just put a single line or two small dots there instead of an "L" shape, sometime it looks better that way. (i like how they draw the nose in RahXephon... basically that's how they draw it from the front...)

Lines are pretty blurry, but I guess that's b/c of the scanner. scanner can always ruin a good pic... :mad:

everything else seems pretty good. it's pretty neat. (although I'd prefer messy, but i guess neat is good if you wanna cg it)

btw, Maxim, that's really smart... i should try hiding the hands of hte char. next time when i drew. they always screw my drawing up...

[crono]

lol yeah, i always hide hands.

thanks for the comments and suggestions