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Dorien · 12-29-2002, 08:34 AM

Not finished yet, but im heading out. Just decided to show what i got so far. Also still deciding wether or not to make him casting Blizzard or Fire. Comments or suggestions?

Dorien · 12-29-2002, 11:00 AM

updated: (the ball of ** coming from the hands is just temp until i think of what spell to cast.)

Edit: Also, i have alreay fixed up his right fingers a bit (his right, not right on pic). They are a bit more normal looking now; i.e. not skinny as hell *_*

Buu · 12-29-2002, 11:49 AM

The face looks awkward. Also, I know you can do better on the energy ball.

Dorien · 12-29-2002, 01:05 PM

as said above, the ball was just there for a place holder. He is going to be casting Blizzard, so ice spikes will be there.
Thanks for feedback, ill see what i can do for the face.

Kyle Version.1 · 12-29-2002, 04:10 PM

make its legs split and not just standing in one spot. I mean come on if its psyching up to cause some damage its legs should be spread out.

Dorien · 01-01-2003, 12:19 PM

I could care less about negative feedback. For only being about my 3rd peice of work and find it impressing to myself. My work dosn't compare to the normal artwork, but how else am I going to improve. And its not like we see that lamer posting things.

Here is what i finished up, never got a spell in the making, but maybe later ;\

weenielobster · 01-01-2003, 04:29 PM

ok i dont care
i had a nightmare las night that a little retarted taru taru attacked me and shot a scribbly line at me you need to learn how to draw.only post cool pics

Buu · 01-01-2003, 04:37 PM

It's getting better, but the head's too small and/or the boddy is too tall. Also, the face is deformed, and the body is too thin. These should be pretty easy to fix, and once that's done, all you will need is a few small touch-ups.

Elite · 01-01-2003, 07:24 PM

Lobster if you dont like the pic dont say anything at all, please keep your comments to yourself. I deleted your mistreating comments.

weenielobster · 01-01-2003, 07:32 PM

umm ok ill tell oyu someting helpfulthe face in the first one is better ok.
but i am actually a very good artist but i find my home lacking a scanner because i am poor.

weenielobster · 01-01-2003, 07:34 PM

plzzz dont make fun of me and i hope you becaome a better artist.

love
me

<(Jed.Kent)> · 01-01-2003, 08:26 PM

Do something like this again and you will be banned.