10-02-2007, 05:58 PM | #1 (permalink) | | The Storyteller Join Date: May 2005 Location: Over There Posts: 297 Style: Dark - Version 5 My Mood: Thanks: 243 Thanked 37x in 29 Posts Gil: 17,975 Bank: 0 Total Gil: 17,975 Donate | Need some opinions on this I'm making a Dynamis Lord/Bahamut Deity-ish set for Elvaan Male, and I need some serious suggestions on WTF to do for the hands. I'd also like to know of the feet are okay or what to change them to, as well as some general comments. HERE ARE TEH PICS! | | ::Quote Selected:: | | 10-03-2007, 03:31 AM | #2 (permalink) | | red means NO Super Moderator Join Date: May 2004 Location: Portugal Posts: 2,998 Style: Light - Version 6 My Mood: Thanks: 70 Thanked 188x in 112 Posts Gil: 32,578 Bank: 0 Total Gil: 32,578 Donate | Re: Need some opinions on this not bad, needs a bit more texturing,
the purple's a bit too much, try lowring down the contrast and give it some white highlights, the cuffs are odd and i dont like them at all, looks like you could give it some golden details to match the feet and waist pieces | | ::Quote Selected:: | | 10-03-2007, 03:47 AM | #3 (permalink) | | RABBITGAME Keeper of Knowledge Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Confirmed Posts: 2,892 Style: Light - Version 6 Thanks: 83 Thanked 216x in 166 Posts Gil: 24,898 Bank: 9,244 Total Gil: 34,142 Donate | Re: Need some opinions on this You can try cloth gloves and boots to keep with the ragged theme. I think the skin would look a little better with a little more detail. | | ::Quote Selected:: | | 10-03-2007, 05:49 AM | #4 (permalink) | | Dr. Tran Brain of Knowledge Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Los Angeles, Ca. Posts: 1,512 Style: Dark - Version 6 My Mood: Thanks: 35 Thanked 103x in 84 Posts Gil: 7,535 Bank: 30,559 Total Gil: 38,094 Donate | Re: Need some opinions on this I like the purple eyes on the firs head image you have. | | ::Quote Selected:: | | 10-03-2007, 06:49 AM | #5 (permalink) | | X's General FFXIWiki Team Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Puerto Rico Posts: 2,802 Style: Light - Version 6 My Mood: Thanks: 204 Thanked 694x in 369 Posts Gil: 43,066 Bank: 0 Total Gil: 43,066 Donate | Re: Need some opinions on this I agree with what they said. Body needs more detail/texture, the cracks in his "skin" need to be thinner and have minor highlights to show that it's streaks of light piercing through cracks and not just lines of purple make-up. Tone down the purple around his eyes as well, he looks like he's got glasses from a distance. Also the wings look like they're glued to his shoulders, to make them look more natural they should be sticking out from his back.
You got me on the gloves but those really have to go. | | ::Quote Selected:: | | 10-03-2007, 07:20 AM | #6 (permalink) | | red means NO Super Moderator Join Date: May 2004 Location: Portugal Posts: 2,998 Style: Light - Version 6 My Mood: Thanks: 70 Thanked 188x in 112 Posts Gil: 32,578 Bank: 0 Total Gil: 32,578 Donate | Re: Need some opinions on this
See how it doesnt have to stand out that much? Just simple highlights instead of straight out bold purple lines. | | ::Quote Selected:: | | 10-03-2007, 08:16 AM | #7 (permalink) | | Shikaree N Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 689 Style: Light - Version 6 My Mood: Thanks: 34 Thanked 41x in 26 Posts Gil: 6,994 Bank: 20,313 Total Gil: 27,307 Donate | Re: Need some opinions on this The shorts look a bit tacky with how ragged they are. if he's going to be something of a god character then it should probably be something mroe aestically pleasing. As it is, it doesn't really match with how the feet look. More than anything the shorts make him look like he's homeless.
It would probably look better if the ragged look was in the gloves and feet as well, if you don't want to lose the raggedy shorts. But that would still make him look less godlike. Coming up with some more stylish shorts/pants/bottoms in a similar vein to the feet would be better.
I also agree that purple streaking is way too much and needs to be lighter and thinned out quite a bit. | | ::Quote Selected:: | | 10-03-2007, 08:54 AM | #8 (permalink) | | Brain of Knowledge Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Dumfries, Virgina Posts: 1,868 Style: Dark - Version 6 My Mood: Thanks: 859 Thanked 163x in 128 Posts Gil: 4,008 Bank: 10,011 Total Gil: 14,019 Donate | Re: Need some opinions on this Originally Posted by Balfree | 
See how it doesnt have to stand out that much? Just simple highlights instead of straight out bold purple lines. | Shadow Lord mode one =x Dynamis lord and Shadow Lord mode 2 has more of a bolder purple lines <_<; Uhg, i'll post a pic of it when I get home | | ::Quote Selected:: | | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes | Linear Mode | Posting Rules | You may not post new threads You may not post replies You may not post attachments You may not edit your posts HTML code is Off | | | All times are GMT -8. The time now is 12:25 AM. | | |