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Old 10-02-2007, 05:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Need some opinions on this
I'm making a Dynamis Lord/Bahamut Deity-ish set for Elvaan Male, and I need some serious suggestions on WTF to do for the hands. I'd also like to know of the feet are okay or what to change them to, as well as some general comments. HERE ARE TEH PICS!

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Old 10-03-2007, 03:31 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Need some opinions on this
not bad, needs a bit more texturing,

the purple's a bit too much, try lowring down the contrast and give it some white highlights, the cuffs are odd and i dont like them at all, looks like you could give it some golden details to match the feet and waist pieces




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Old 10-03-2007, 03:47 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Need some opinions on this
You can try cloth gloves and boots to keep with the ragged theme. I think the skin would look a little better with a little more detail.



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Old 10-03-2007, 05:49 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Need some opinions on this
I like the purple eyes on the firs head image you have.



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Re: Need some opinions on this
I agree with what they said. Body needs more detail/texture, the cracks in his "skin" need to be thinner and have minor highlights to show that it's streaks of light piercing through cracks and not just lines of purple make-up. Tone down the purple around his eyes as well, he looks like he's got glasses from a distance. Also the wings look like they're glued to his shoulders, to make them look more natural they should be sticking out from his back.

You got me on the gloves but those really have to go.



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See how it doesnt have to stand out that much? Just simple highlights instead of straight out bold purple lines.




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Re: Need some opinions on this
The shorts look a bit tacky with how ragged they are. if he's going to be something of a god character then it should probably be something mroe aestically pleasing. As it is, it doesn't really match with how the feet look. More than anything the shorts make him look like he's homeless.

It would probably look better if the ragged look was in the gloves and feet as well, if you don't want to lose the raggedy shorts. But that would still make him look less godlike. Coming up with some more stylish shorts/pants/bottoms in a similar vein to the feet would be better.

I also agree that purple streaking is way too much and needs to be lighter and thinned out quite a bit.



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See how it doesnt have to stand out that much? Just simple highlights instead of straight out bold purple lines.
Shadow Lord mode one =x Dynamis lord and Shadow Lord mode 2 has more of a bolder purple lines <_<; Uhg, i'll post a pic of it when I get home



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